Super writing!

We have been working on improving our writing this week and Vincent Kearsley Bullen (Y4) wrote this:

'The dreadful vibration from the rain roared like a big scaly dragon.  The sparks, as hot as the sun, melted the crumbly ground.  Flames came as bright as a shimmering chandelier.  I can smell the sadness in the mum's eyes.'

We have also been writing Evacuee postcards to our mothers based on our work woth the book Carrie's War.  Joseph Barnabas (Y3) wrote this:

'Dear Mum,
Mr Evans is letting us help in the shop and the garden is a reasonable size to play in.  I miss you a lot.  We ger nice food.  I feel a bit numb but it's nice down in Wales.  I hope you're OK down in London.  Love Nick'

Excellent wow words from both of them!